Well...Friends...I am here today with some themes...But don't know how to present it.....I believe I am a still a small child in the world of blogs......Last night I was much tired...I had to skip My dinner.....I was having cold..I guess......as there is nothing unusual for me getting cold this season....Its raining hard here in Kerala......
Its very intersting to be in your den watching the rain with a cup of coffee or tea in your hand.....but this time I had to find my place inside My blanket astounding at the rain...The rain was singing loud this time...I was watching it through my window lying there in My bed....Droplets of water touched my face in between......."blessed"
I don't know how I slept in between...It was damn cold outside and damn hot inside my body...It can be compared to the struggle between the individual and the society in life......
Didn't knew how I slept....I was conquered by sleep in between......The Princess of sleep called Dreamz was waiting for me.....this time I was taken to a world by the Princess....For me Everything seemed to be strange.......A place which seemed like heaven...later only I realised that it was the paradise called heaven....
It seemed as if some one was showing me light...I walked through the direction of the light......Suddenly the light ceased...I felt as If some one was holding me back.....It was the king of evil..the satan.....
It was holding me back......It prompted me to commit sins.....But suddenly the light came again and started me to show the way....I was in between the two....I tried to pull my hand from the evil...but it was holding me tight.....I tried and tried.....but I failed......
Suddenly the light came closer to me......the light helped me to stay serene in the midst of turbulence......The evil was burned in the gloriole.......I was absorbed by the light.....and was placed as a star there......I was given My halo.......
Suddenly the light turned into a deity....I was asked to go back to earth and to do What it did to me when I was in the hands of the satan.......
I was also given the occult power......Suddenly a shooting star came......It took me back to earth.....It landed on the sea.......
Suddenly I felt that I am out of My bed.......Ohhh God....Everything Was a Dream....and I was Completely alright......
Its very intersting to be in your den watching the rain with a cup of coffee or tea in your hand.....but this time I had to find my place inside My blanket astounding at the rain...The rain was singing loud this time...I was watching it through my window lying there in My bed....Droplets of water touched my face in between......."blessed"
I don't know how I slept in between...It was damn cold outside and damn hot inside my body...It can be compared to the struggle between the individual and the society in life......
Didn't knew how I slept....I was conquered by sleep in between......The Princess of sleep called Dreamz was waiting for me.....this time I was taken to a world by the Princess....For me Everything seemed to be strange.......A place which seemed like heaven...later only I realised that it was the paradise called heaven....
It seemed as if some one was showing me light...I walked through the direction of the light......Suddenly the light ceased...I felt as If some one was holding me back.....It was the king of evil..the satan.....
It was holding me back......It prompted me to commit sins.....But suddenly the light came again and started me to show the way....I was in between the two....I tried to pull my hand from the evil...but it was holding me tight.....I tried and tried.....but I failed......
Suddenly the light came closer to me......the light helped me to stay serene in the midst of turbulence......The evil was burned in the gloriole.......I was absorbed by the light.....and was placed as a star there......I was given My halo.......
Suddenly the light turned into a deity....I was asked to go back to earth and to do What it did to me when I was in the hands of the satan.......
I was also given the occult power......Suddenly a shooting star came......It took me back to earth.....It landed on the sea.......
Suddenly I felt that I am out of My bed.......Ohhh God....Everything Was a Dream....and I was Completely alright......
8 comments:
good man ....i can see a good future in literature......keep it up
td,
its simply fantastic and i too agree with syam, your writing is fabulous. dont give up on it.
just loved the way you wrote it, it appeared as if i can see it.
warmest wishes.
trisha
"Its very intersting to be in your den watching the rain with a cup of coffee or tea in your hand....."
Beautiful. I am becoming your fan :)
I really miss the monsoon. She was my best friend.
"It was damn cold outside and damn hot inside my body...It can be compared to the struggle between the individual and the society in life..... "
Really great writting. I may start a fan club :)
keralthil ninnu mari nilkunna ella malyaliyum miss cheyunnathu aa mazhayanoo ...
pinne swapnagale patti
njan oru ppost ezhutiyittund
interest undegil vayikku
http://sps4u.blogspot.com/
@ Syam Annan ...thanks a lot bhai....
Dear Didi,
You alwayz encouraged me and Your works Inspired me to write more and more.....
Thanks a lot for that frank comment...
Keep Reading...Cheerzz.. :-)
Dear Ashok Anna.
emm...Monsoon is My best friend....Some times she gives you more happiness than Your love....
Thanks a lot....and about the "fan club"....If you are particular about it..please start..he he :-)
Keep Reading...Cheerzz... :-)
Dear Sreekanth,
Yeah...Keralthine purtahaula ellavarum athe miss cheunne...ore pakshe keralthine mathram tharan pakarnu tharan pattuna aaa sugham...vere enthine kondane pakaram vaykan kazhiunathe.....
I am interested in Dreamz...I'll hve a look at it....soon.....
Keep Reading....Cheeerzzz.. ;-)
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